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Post by Hazuki on Jan 24, 2008 0:30:15 GMT -5
I entered this poem in a contest and it won! So I hope you all like it. ^^ ______________________
Red like Roses, White like Ribbons
Like snow, it’s white It shines in the sun Giving its ethereal glow. Like fire, it’s red It makes it softer than silk So fragile, it might tear. Like doves, it’s white His hand in my hair Tying it, while saying those three words. Like cardinals, it’s red With shaky hands I drowned my eyes on him. Like the moon, it’s white It dances with the breeze Full of serene and peace. Like the sun, it’s red Brightly vivid colors Full of beauty and grace. Like white, his love still shines for me And the same color of the cries in the dark Like a red memory that became lost forever.
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Post by pinky on Jan 24, 2008 18:17:20 GMT -5
Yeappy, I read it in your fanclub!Its soo pretty!You should open a poetry thread here and pc! ^_^
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Post by midori on Jan 25, 2008 21:04:52 GMT -5
It's very beautiful. There's clearly a reason why you won. Make more! : D
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